Replicant diaphone call
through dead air
and the hours unwound
Time is tied in knots
in the undertow.
Another deliberately-fragmented piece, only this time without such obvious reference. Think fog, shipwrecks, space, insomnia, and death monologues. Additionally, a diaphone was regularly used to sound warnings: most commonly as a fog horn.
Not sure what to think of this one, however the nature of the project is to upload what I have. My major irk is the repetition of 'undertow' from my last piece; it appears to be my word of the week. It stays because I am indeed prone to recycling phrases; however, never before in less than 24 hours. Ahaha.
A likely candidate for future revision.
Heh, this is one of the pieces that I am more content with, so I am glad you were able to take something of substance from the wreckage of words. Thank-you kindly.