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Replicant diaphone call
pressed
through dead air
space
Between waves
and the hours unwound
in down
and cotton-mouth
swan-song:
Time is tied in knots
around ankles
cold
and caught
in the undertow.
Replicant diaphone call
pressed
through dead air
space
Between waves
and the hours unwound
in down
and cotton-mouth
swan-song:
Time is tied in knots
around ankles
cold
and caught
in the undertow.
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Updated: 19/01/2010 @ 07:38
Project2010: 028 of 375 (January 18th)
Project2010: 028 of 375 (January 18th)
Another deliberately-fragmented piece, only this time without such obvious reference. Think fog, shipwrecks, space, insomnia, and death monologues. Additionally, a diaphone was regularly used to sound warnings: most commonly as a fog horn.
Not sure what to think of this one, however the nature of the project is to upload what I have. My major irk is the repetition of 'undertow' from my last piece; it appears to be my word of the week. It stays because I am indeed prone to recycling phrases; however, never before in less than 24 hours. Ahaha.
A likely candidate for future revision.
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'Time is tied in knots
around ankles
cold
and caught
in the undertow' This will stay with me for a while.
around ankles
cold
and caught
in the undertow' This will stay with me for a while.